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I used Grammarly to grammar check this post, because my internal editor was overbooked and they offer a great service.

Hey folks!

We’d like to thank Relleman for her recent review of New Girl (Anti-Heroes Book 1). Here’s what she had to say about the first book in the Anti-Heroes series:

“What a great concept. I was routing for the not so bad-bad guys. The so called good guys are bullies, the adults think they are a breath away from evil, their parents are forcing them to commit crimes. It was action packed. I found it a little short, as I read it in just about a half hour, so it went fast. This book was only lacking maybe a little backstory. I did learn a little about the main characters, but felt hungry for more info. I mean who did kill a certain teacher?

I am banking on a certain principal or maybe… well I guess you have to read the book and see who you think did it. I can’t recommend this book enough. Get the book, it is a fun, fast, action packed story.” –Relleman

Much thanks again, Relleman, for the review!

Do you want to know who killed Blaze? Who is that elusive DevilMan? All your questions will be answered in the conclusion of Anti-Heroes: Witch Wars, book six of our young adult serial. Watch for the release any day now! And we’ll also have a sneak peek at the final series cover coming soon.

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Don’t forget, you can grab New Girl (Anti-Heroes Book 1) for free at Amazon, Kobo, Smashwords, and B&N. Click the book cover above or the links here to grab your copy now!

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Hey folks!

Now you can grab part two of my fantasy serial, The Black Act: Witch Twins Secrets. Cover art, blurb, and buy links below. Don’t forget, you can also pick up part one, The Black Act: Witch Twins Born for free at Amazon, Kobo, on The Black Act page, and at Smashwords. Cover art for that one and download links below too.

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Available On Kindle US
Availlable On Kindle CA
Available On Kindle UK
Available On Kobo
Available On Nook
Available on Smashwords

This is a serial fantasy novel that will be released in regular installments. Watch for Book 3: Witch Twins Cursed coming soon.

The history of a curse is filled with bloody battles, bitter hatred, and dark secrets.

Through five generations, ghosts of war haunt the wise women. When the rebellion of Glenna ends, their curse sleeps bound in the Tunnels of the Dead, waiting for its chance to re-awaken the war between the wood people and Dalthwein clans. Claire, a wise woman born in the valley of the fae, unwittingly helps it escape imprisonment, while her twin sister Anna receives psychic glimpses of ancient secrets she must unravel. With her scribe teacher Rosalind, she also struggles to uncover the reasons behind Claire’s strange behavior, ever escalating since the death of their guild mother, Grianne.

The Age of the Wise Women will cease if the curse does not end with Anna and Claire. Perhaps inheriting the mistakes of their ancestors and learning the truths of their identities will bring great suffering for these witch twins.

In Book 2: Witch Twins Secrets Anna begins having visions of the witch guild’s creation history, and Claire reveals the devastating secret their guild mother told her before she died.


And pick up Book 1 for free!
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FREE On Kindle US
Available On Kindle CA
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FREE On Kobo
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Hey folks!

Lisa Hook drops by again today with some tips for writing fantasy fiction your readers will love. Take a peek below.

How to Write Fantasy Fiction that your Readers will Love

Witches, demons, vampires and werewolves… they have been entertaining and absorbing us for some time now and, despite their longevity, the trend for this type of fantasy fiction is far from dying out. Paranormal fiction sales are booming, particularly in the young adult market, and they show no signs of slowing down. The public knows what it likes and it likes the fantasy genre: the darker the better. The challenge today is to come up with something original that hasn’t been done before. Once you’ve done your research, you’re ready to jump into the fray and, with a few simple tips about fantasy writing, you can create the type of fiction that your readers will love and will want to come back to again and again.

The World is the Key

Creating a unique world that absorbs the reader and pulls them in is such a crucial factor in writing good fantasy novels. You need to make the world as real as possible in your own mind, so flesh it out and cover every aspect of it so that when your characters journey through it, the reader will believe it. Think about the laws of your world, the moons and tides and gravity, the weather and geography of the land and races that inhabit the world. If you don’t take the time to create something that you believe in, how do you expect your reader to? The world of Hogwarts, Middle Earth, Never Land and Utopia were painstakingly brought to life because of the detail given to them. It is a good idea to map out the world, as well as the plot.

Characters

The world should reflect the characters and vice versa, if they don’t, your reader won’t suspend disbelief in the story. Don’t stick to 21st Century characters because this won’t work if your world is set a long time ago or in the distant future, unless the character is a time traveler. Readers like multiple stories that follow the characters through a series of events, but only if they like and believe in the characters.

Avoid clichés. Let characters be real people, with real problems. The orphan and ‘chosen one’ has been over-used in fantasy fiction and should be laid to rest unless he or she has some great idiosyncrasies that give the scenario a smack of reality. Similarly, there is usually a destiny or prophecy that will be resisted at first, but this causes many readers a great deal of frustration these days and they lose interest in the story. If the character undergoes a series of challenges that are unexpected however, and their personality develops with the story, this is a much better method to employ.

Take some time to think about your character’s personality as well as their physical appearance. The temptation among fantasy writers is to make their male and female leads beautiful beyond belief, with in depth aesthetic details such as the color of their hair and eyes and their lean physical form. The trend used to be that characters were defined by how smart they were, intellectually speaking, but from the 80s onwards, that changed radically to how good they looked.

Imagine instead a character that is quirky and who is defined by their personality rather than outward appearance. Imagine someone who is in the grip of a compulsion, such as an addiction for opium or for food. At once they become more real and more compelling than their counterparts. They could lose what they are striving to achieve because of this simple flaw in their character and at the same time the reader will relate to them. In Dragon Prince, by Melanie Rawn, the magic users become addicted to the drug that enhances their abilities, while in Tolkien’s fantasies, dwarves are often portrayed as drunks. The flaw doesn’t have to be a serious addiction like alcohol or drugs. It may simply be an appetite for something, such as an eating disorder. Research into such topics will throw light on them fairly quickly. For example, a character who overeats because of a compulsion to do so, can be found to be suffering from a craving, because ‘cravings are linked to our emotions and the need for comfort’ according to Licensed Prescriptions. By taking the time to research compulsions, addictions and other psychological traits, you can create flesh and blood characters that evoke empathy among your audience.

Structure

Structure can be difficult to keep organized in this genre because there may be sub-plots and various layers to the storytelling that are easy to lose track of. Your reader needs to be kept absorbed and enthralled by everything that is going on: there needs to be continuity in the plot as well as characters. So how do you manage all this?

A good method of organizing structure is to make a list, with each point representing the next event in the story. Writer’s Digest suggests using a stack of index cards, with each one featuring a one-line synopsis of a scene, and stick to one scene per card. You can order your scenes as you want them, and then add one or two sub-plots with your index cards too. Lay your cards out onto a table and order them where they would go best in your novel. When you think you have finished, simply go through them and see if your story makes sense. If it doesn’t, tear up cards and add new ones. A logical method like this can really work when you’re tackling a fantasy novel.

Copyright (C) 2013 Lisa Hook

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Hey folks,

Hope July has been treating everyone great wherever you are. We’re busy getting ready to move, which means lots of apartment hunting in our near future. And lots of boxes. Ugh, I hate packing.

I wanted to share with you a sneak peek at the book cover for The Black Act Book 2: Witch Twins Secrets. I’m hoping to have part two of the serial out by July 15. For now, don’t forget you can grab The Black Act Book 1: Witch Twins Born for free at Amazon, Kobo, and Smashwords. You can also visit The Black Act page here to grab the first book in PDF. Thank you for the downloads, and for making Book 1 #13 in Kindle Store > Kindle eBooks > Teen & Young Adult > Science Fiction & Fantasy > Fantasy > Coming of Age!

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Cover art by me. You can view more or query about cover art here and here.

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Hey folks,

Just a reminder that the Shut the Book on Child Abuse auction is coming up July 15. I’ve donated a signed copy of Old School and of the Detritus anthology. Here’s the details from my first post on the auction:

Fellow writer Heather Wildman recently asked if I’d like to donate some books to this cause, and since I personally think it’s a very worthy one, and being a survivor myself, I’m spreading the word. The auction isn’t until July, but please browse the sites and bookmark. Here’s some info taken from the Shut the Book on Child Abuse site and Children Without a Voice.

This is a silent auction that will take place between July 15 – 20, and winners will be announced July 22. The purpose is to raise money to donate to one local and one national nonprofit organization focused on prevention, education, and advocacy against child abuse. (taken from the site)

Please visit HERE for full details on the auction. I’ll be donating two signed books–Detrius and Old School–and I’ll post a reminder about the auction in late June.

Please also visit Sunflower House, the local non-profit the auction proceeds will be donated to, as well as Children Without a Voice.

For anyone who’s dealt with, or is currently dealing with, domestic abuse, here’s a wonderful video by Patrick Stewart. He says it far more eloquently than I can.

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